الاثنين، 22 نوفمبر 2010



Educational system in Egypt.
            Education is the best way to develop any country , but unfortunately the educational system in Egypt is a big disaster need a quick solution . Education build student's minds ,which make the whole society develop also . But within our educational system's problems I don't think that is going to happen. We need to fix our system first to make this achievement .
           In Egypt , education seems to be available to every one but the truth is this is our biggest problem because education here reflects the class system . there are expensive private schools for the upper-class students and other schools for the common people –which are not good at all- . which make the efficiency level of student in both schools so different . Beside the exam system that destroy all principles of the egalitarian . That is why now we heard about bad doctors and teachers and so on…. , because there is no effective system to evaluate the graduates .
          Another big problem in our educational system is the lack of school's quality , Our schools need a lot of preparation . As example school's space must be fit with students numbers and also the air and the light must enter the class for the student health . Not only our schools which need preparation but also our curriculums need more and more preparation because the currently used curriculums are so old, useless , and don't proper to nowadays knowledge . That's why our graduates become unprofessional in their work which lead to the disaster of our teacher's ignorance , so the teachers '' leave the students High and Dray '',which mean they don't understand any thing .
          It is not enough to present the problem but we must find a solution for it . The government can has a big role in solving this disaster by providing more training for the teachers to be more professional and effective . Also we can develop the curriculums to fit the information revolution nowadays . But all of these solutions wont be effective if we don't change and develop the methods that are using in the system . So, the important element to achieve any progress or renewal is the sense of responsibility .
         To sum up this dilemma , I wish that there still be hope , so any way we must keep trying to develop our educational system and solve all its problems , so that we could develop our entire society . As it said '' Better late than never '' ,so we must begin now before it will be so late
An out line for the educational system in Egypt .
1- Is our educational system has problems ?
2- What are these problems ?
- Lack of egalitarian in the system .
- A lot of problems in our schools .
- There are no proper exams .
- Old curriculums .
- Unprofessional teachers .
3- What are the solutions of these problems ?
- Provide training for the teachers.
-Renew the curriculums .
-Develop the methods that used in the system.

الأحد، 31 أكتوبر 2010

Argumentative essay

Additional books
               As usual, every renewal action must faced so hard and every correction must be fighted , so that is what happened when the minister Ahmed Zakey Bader decided to cancel the additional books, a lot of people opposed his decision and consider it as aviolation of human thinking right. But on the other hand a lot of people think of this decision as the first step to develop our education - Especially the parents- the most category effected by this decision. Every group has an opposed opinion and also reasonable justifications.

              On the one hand , there are many oppose the additional books in our education because –as they thought- the main reason behind the law level of our students. As it contain a lot of mistakes wither in grammar or invocabulary, So that the students can get confused because of these mistakes. Beside that those books are so expensive that's why the parents have to pay through their nose to buy them. Additional books and now adays teachers turned all of our students into machines , cant's think or creat new ideas, In other words students became copies from those books.

               But on the other hand , there are many people in favor of using additional book and they justify that by describing school books as they are sucks and uesless . So students cant't understand any thing from school books . Students turned to additional books because they are organized and clear .And they give students chance to practice a lot on grammer and vocabulary by doing a lot of exercises , that is why students can understand . Those books so easly.

                     The bottom line is that our education needs a lot of correction and development , and to make this happened the ministry and the teachers must cooperate with each other to develop our curriculums and forget about those additional books .The ministry can make books give the students the chance to practice their curriculums as additional books do. The teacher can be more creative in teaching to the students and doesn't count on additional books

An outline

An outline
1-Are the additional books important?
Opinion1 Yes ,they are so important.
Opinion2 No , they are adisaster.

2-Why they are important ? and why not?
- Because
-they provide more practice for students.
- they are so organized .
-They show the grammar and the vocabulary in agreat view.

3-Why they are adisaster ?
-Because:
-they contain a lot of mistakes.
-they never let the students become creative they just make them acopy from the book .-they force the parents pay through their nose .

4-how can we solve this proplem?
A - the education ministry role.
B -teacher's role

الأحد، 17 أكتوبر 2010

First draft

Water pollution

             Everybody has amain dream to live in apure environment . But unfortunatly we live in anightmare which is called pollution that effects on all sources of our life such as,water,air and so on .Even we have noise pollution and also technology pollution .But the most dangerous kind is water pollution that we must study and try to know its causes, its effects and do our best to get solutions to this dilemma.
              There are many reasons behind water pollution like adding chemical materials to water ,but experts say that the main reason of water pollution is agriculture. for example , farm animals like cattle ,pigs ,sheep and goats are often left to feed on grass in open fields bordered by streams or rivers, so animals can pollute water supplies when large animals loosen dirt , and rocks enters in it .Also farmers themselves can be amajour cause of water pollution ,as they add chemical materials to fertilize the soil and get much crops. But there is also the phenomenon of people who wash and clean their carpets ,dishes and even their animals in the Nile. factories and ships throw thier wastes in the water instead of burying it healthily , so they pollute water as well.
               Water pollution effects directly on our health as it causes kindney disease, liver complaint and also liver fluke. when we use pollutant water in agriculture, that cause spoilage to our food and that is main reason behind the bad quality of vegetables and fruits in our markets .pollutant water can damage the soil as well.And this disaster that can turn our good soil into abig desert and we wont be able to get pure water any more ,then it will be the end of our life on the earth. 
            Some people thought that solutions will be so expensive, but solutions don't have to cost much . There are simple methods for farms of any size to reduce or prevent pollution of water supplies. As instead of leading animalsto water , bring water to them . It doesn't have to be transported long distances ,farmers can send water through pipes to watering areas for their animals with apump powered by electricity ,also tree roots provide natural support for soil as they help stop soil loss from heavy rains and keep the sun from drying out soil .Government must set rules to prevent farmers from adding chemical materials to the plants causing water pollution . 
               After all these facts ,we must now realize how big is the problem that we are dealing with . water pollution is the most important problem nowadays,so we  must save it to protect our existence.Otherwise we are going to vanish.    
      

السبت، 16 أكتوبر 2010

An out line

Pollution in Egypt

   what are kinds of pollution ? 
water pollution 
air pollution 
noise pollution 
technology pollution 
   what are the main causes of water pollution? 
farm animals
farmers
agriculture 
chemical materials 
factories and ships
     what are the effects of water pollution ?
damage soil 
spoil food  
vanish of pure water and human being
      what are solutions of water pollution?
keep animals away from water supplies
goverment set rules
we mustn't throw dirt in the water