Argumentative essay

Additional books

               As usual, every renewal action must faced so hard and every correction must be fighted , so that is what happened when the minister Ahmed Zakey Bader decided to cancel the additional books, a lot of people opposed his decision and consider it as aviolation of human thinking right. But on the other hand a lot of people think of this decision as the first step to develop our education - Especially the parents- the most category effected by this decision. Every group has an opposed opinion and also reasonable justifications.

              On the one hand , there are many oppose the additional books in our education because –as they thought- the main reason behind the law level of our students. As it contain a lot of mistakes wither in grammar or invocabulary, So that the students can get confused because of these mistakes. Beside that those books are so expensive that's why the parents have to pay through their nose to buy them. Additional books and now adays teachers turned all of our students into machines , cant's think or creat new ideas, In other words students became copies from those books.

               But on the other hand , there are many people in favor of using additional book and they justify that by describing school books as they are sucks and uesless . So students cant't understand any thing from school books . Students turned to additional books because they are organized and clear .And they give students chance to practice a lot on grammer and vocabulary by doing a lot of exercises , that is why students can understand . Those books so easly.

                     The bottom line is that our education needs a lot of correction and development , and to make this happened the ministry and the teachers must cooperate with each other to develop our curriculums and forget about those additional books .The ministry can make books give the students the chance to practice their curriculums as additional books do. The teacher can be more creative in teaching to the students and doesn't count on additional books

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1-Are the additional books important?

Opinion1 Yes ,they are so important.

Opinion2 No , they are adisaster.

2-Why they are important ? and why not?

- Because

-they provide more practice for students.

- they are so organized .

-They show the grammar and the vocabulary in agreat view.

3-Why they are adisaster ?

-Because:

-they contain a lot of mistakes.

-they never let the students become creative they just make them acopy from the book .-they force the parents pay through their nose .

4-how can we solve this proplem?

A - the education ministry role.

B -teacher's role

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Water pollution

             Everybody has amain dream to live in apure environment . But unfortunatly we live in anightmare which is called pollution that effects on all sources of our life such as,water,air and so on .Even we have noise pollution and also technology pollution .But the most dangerous kind is water pollution that we must study and try to know its causes, its effects and do our best to get solutions to this dilemma.

              There are many reasons behind water pollution like adding chemical materials to water ,but experts say that the main reason of water pollution is agriculture. for example , farm animals like cattle ,pigs ,sheep and goats are often left to feed on grass in open fields bordered by streams or rivers, so animals can pollute water supplies when large animals loosen dirt , and rocks enters in it .Also farmers themselves can be amajour cause of water pollution ,as they add chemical materials to fertilize the soil and get much crops. But there is also the phenomenon of people who wash and clean their carpets ,dishes and even their animals in the Nile. factories and ships throw thier wastes in the water instead of burying it healthily , so they pollute water as well.

               Water pollution effects directly on our health as it causes kindney disease, liver complaint and also liver fluke. when we use pollutant water in agriculture, that cause spoilage to our food and that is main reason behind the bad quality of vegetables and fruits in our markets .pollutant water can damage the soil as well.And this disaster that can turn our good soil into abig desert and we wont be able to get pure water any more ,then it will be the end of our life on the earth. 

            Some people thought that solutions will be so expensive, but solutions don't have to cost much . There are simple methods for farms of any size to reduce or prevent pollution of water supplies. As instead of leading animalsto water , bring water to them . It doesn't have to be transported long distances ,farmers can send water through pipes to watering areas for their animals with apump powered by electricity ,also tree roots provide natural support for soil as they help stop soil loss from heavy rains and keep the sun from drying out soil .Government must set rules to prevent farmers from adding chemical materials to the plants causing water pollution . 

               After all these facts ,we must now realize how big is the problem that we are dealing with . water pollution is the most important problem nowadays,so we  must save it to protect our existence.Otherwise we are going to vanish.    

      

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Pollution in Egypt

   what are kinds of pollution ? 

water pollution 

air pollution 

noise pollution 

technology pollution 

   what are the main causes of water pollution? 

farm animals

farmers

agriculture 

chemical materials 

factories and ships

     what are the effects of water pollution ?

damage soil 

spoil food  

vanish of pure water and human being

      what are solutions of water pollution?

keep animals away from water supplies

goverment set rules

we mustn't throw dirt in the water

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name : safaa okasha abd elhameed
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